(Jo) Suni nahi baatein karta hai
Nayi nayi baatein karta hai
Use siyasat mein jana hai
Napi tuli baatein karta hai
Dost kahoon ya dushman usko
Mili juli baatein karta hai
Uske dil ki main kya janoon
Dhaki puti baatein karta hai
Gaon ke lab gaon ka lehja
Bhali bhali baatein karta hai
Shehar se aaya hai wo shayad
Sadi gali baatein karta hai
Wo barsaat ki dhoop ke jaisi
Dhuli dhuli baatein karta hai
Yeh taleem ki taseerein hain
Khuli khuli baatein karta hai
Sab kehte hain shayar hai par
Mamooli baatein karta haiKhuli khuli baatein karta hai
Sab kehte hain shayar hai par
Dost kahoon ya dushman usko
ReplyDeleteMili juli baatein karta hai
shubhanallah, bahut gahri baat kah di aapne.
khubsurat ghazal hai.
mubarakbaad.
Uske dil ki main kya janoon
ReplyDeleteDhaki puti baatein karta hai
Sab kehte hain shayar hai par
Mamooli baatein karta hai
Khoob kaha.....bahut badhiya
rachnaa mei prastut vichaar
ReplyDeletesaraahneey haiN,,,
dil aur dimaagh ne mil kar hi
kahaa lagtaa hai ye sb !
Wo barsaat ki dhoop ke jaisi
Dhuli dhuli baatein karta hai
mujhe khaas taur pr psand aaya ....
Daanish Sahab, Dr. Monika Sharma aur Mahendra Verma Ji ka bohot shukriya!!
ReplyDeleteUmmeed hai aage bhi aapko meri tukbandi pasand ayegi.
Vishal
Wo barsaat ki dhoop ke jaisi
ReplyDeleteDhuli dhuli baatein karta hai
Yeh taleem ki taseerein hain
Khuli khuli baatein karta hai
Sab kehte hain shayar hai par
Mamooli baatein karta hai
wah kya baat hai ... yeh 3 stanzas mujhe sabse zyada pasand aaye ...overall I can say u did justice to the poem.
विशाल जी, आपकी कई रचनाएं पढ़ी हैं, बहुत अच्छी लगी.
ReplyDeleteमेरा सुझाव है कि रोमन के बजाए (या साथ) देवनागरी में भी लिखा जाए तो अच्छा रहेगा.
Sujhav ke liye dhanyavad shahid Mirza sahab, Aage se khayal rakhoonga.
ReplyDeleteVishal
हुक्मरान बोलते हैं कहाँ नाप तोल के..,
ReplyDeleteसिंहासन को पाते है उटपटांग बोल के.....