tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3435005193952061908.post6610442663825043302..comments2023-05-22T15:51:37.324+05:30Comments on Aabshaar: Nayi Nayi Baatein Karta HaiVishalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12635270721194708839noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3435005193952061908.post-4538398996508915412013-05-07T16:32:49.102+05:302013-05-07T16:32:49.102+05:30हुक्मरान बोलते हैं कहाँ नाप तोल के..,
सिंहासन को प...हुक्मरान बोलते हैं कहाँ नाप तोल के..,<br />सिंहासन को पाते है उटपटांग बोल के..... <br />Neetu Singhalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14843330374912315760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3435005193952061908.post-21424003590570976362011-04-22T23:43:29.384+05:302011-04-22T23:43:29.384+05:30Sujhav ke liye dhanyavad shahid Mirza sahab, Aage ...Sujhav ke liye dhanyavad shahid Mirza sahab, Aage se khayal rakhoonga.<br />VishalVishalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12635270721194708839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3435005193952061908.post-34084978605215791472011-04-22T20:46:36.052+05:302011-04-22T20:46:36.052+05:30विशाल जी, आपकी कई रचनाएं पढ़ी हैं, बहुत अच्छी लगी.
...विशाल जी, आपकी कई रचनाएं पढ़ी हैं, बहुत अच्छी लगी.<br />मेरा सुझाव है कि रोमन के बजाए (या साथ) देवनागरी में भी लिखा जाए तो अच्छा रहेगा.शाहिद मिर्ज़ा ''शाहिद''https://www.blogger.com/profile/09169582610976061788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3435005193952061908.post-20478467172495853842011-04-22T13:58:41.598+05:302011-04-22T13:58:41.598+05:30Wo barsaat ki dhoop ke jaisi
Dhuli dhuli baatein k...Wo barsaat ki dhoop ke jaisi<br />Dhuli dhuli baatein karta hai<br /><br /><br />Yeh taleem ki taseerein hain<br />Khuli khuli baatein karta hai<br /><br />Sab kehte hain shayar hai par<br />Mamooli baatein karta hai<br /><br />wah kya baat hai ... yeh 3 stanzas mujhe sabse zyada pasand aaye ...overall I can say u did justice to the poem.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08407627276622581503noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3435005193952061908.post-60399680816467174602011-04-21T12:47:47.021+05:302011-04-21T12:47:47.021+05:30Daanish Sahab, Dr. Monika Sharma aur Mahendra Verm...Daanish Sahab, Dr. Monika Sharma aur Mahendra Verma Ji ka bohot shukriya!!<br />Ummeed hai aage bhi aapko meri tukbandi pasand ayegi.<br />VishalVishalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12635270721194708839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3435005193952061908.post-25570182794827685712011-04-21T07:55:10.244+05:302011-04-21T07:55:10.244+05:30rachnaa mei prastut vichaar
saraahneey haiN,,,
d...rachnaa mei prastut vichaar <br />saraahneey haiN,,, <br />dil aur dimaagh ne mil kar hi <br />kahaa lagtaa hai ye sb ! <br /><br />Wo barsaat ki dhoop ke jaisi<br />Dhuli dhuli baatein karta hai <br /><br />mujhe khaas taur pr psand aaya ....daanishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15771816049026571278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3435005193952061908.post-74014807888425146652011-04-20T21:46:52.148+05:302011-04-20T21:46:52.148+05:30Uske dil ki main kya janoon
Dhaki puti baatein kar...Uske dil ki main kya janoon<br />Dhaki puti baatein karta hai<br /><br />Sab kehte hain shayar hai par<br />Mamooli baatein karta hai<br /><br />Khoob kaha.....bahut badhiya डॉ. मोनिका शर्मा https://www.blogger.com/profile/02358462052477907071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3435005193952061908.post-62939908767930402422011-04-20T20:25:10.062+05:302011-04-20T20:25:10.062+05:30Dost kahoon ya dushman usko
Mili juli baatein kart...Dost kahoon ya dushman usko<br />Mili juli baatein karta hai<br /><br />shubhanallah, bahut gahri baat kah di aapne.<br />khubsurat ghazal hai.<br />mubarakbaad.महेन्द्र वर्माhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03223817246093814433noreply@blogger.com